Formal Email Format

Effort: 10 minutes

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Imagine that you are interested in applying for a part-time job as a sales associate at a local retail store. Review the email below and revise it to be a formal and appropriate inquiry. Re-write the email in the text box. See tips for writing a Professional email.

Hey there! I came across the part-time sales associate position at your store, and I'm really stoked to explore this opportunity! With my past experience in a similar role and a passion for customer service, I'm confident that I can make an awesome addition to your cool team. Can we schedule a quick chat to discuss more about the job opening and take things to the next level? I’m psyched to hear back from you!


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